I hope the title doesn't fool you guys, this is simply just saying that Chapter 9 will be delayed until all spelling and grammar checks are done on all 8 current chapters. This is to ensure that everything flows and makes sense.
As you may have noticed, Ukitake Samuels was a Lieutenant when they found him, but when he introduced himself I put him as a Private. Mistakes like this cannot be allowed otherwise they will confuse the reader and mess up the story line.
Spelling and grammar errors could also mess up the story line and confuse the reader, like in Chapter 2: If the Spoon Fits, Use It. It had originally said: "...so people would poor money into the Church." When it should have said, and now does say: "...so people would pour money into the Church." An error like that could confuse the reader and overall mess up the mood of the story.
Thank you for understanding,
Squattop